I decided to do another piece, only it is not a narrative, but a song. Lyrics can hold many journeys, and many menaing within its verses. I decided that since i always write lame poems and stories, i'll take the direction of a song instead. I'll probably sing it and record, and post it up one day, but until then, you'll have to make up your own beat and try and see if you can make your own song using these lyrics. Mind you, this is an activity to do now, and not to plagerize this or any of my creative pieces. Copyright is prohibited, unless i give you permission. findmelissaafoa@hotmail.com is where you can write emails about my poems and stories, so if you have any feedback or any POLITE comments about my pieces. Thanks man, start tuning your voices ;)



With or Without - Mel Afoa

with you was like living in a dream

a dream full of daises and violets it seemed

yet you made your own way by yourself baby

and im stuck waiting feeling old, feeling crazy

and i think to myself of how much my breaks its true

coz loneliness is my shadow overbearing its you

your the one who supposed to stand by me

yet where are baby? where are you baby?

im betting im better without you baby

your influence on my life was more than hazy

now i know where we stand and thats apart

with our without you wont break my heart

yeah, honey love x2

so you found out i moved out two days after,yea

took you long to figure out why my presence weren't there

now what you gonna do, you gonna try and win me over?

i bet less yes, more no, boy your playin a sober

can't break me, can't make me, im sayin im gone,

like a boy nerd doing homework, aint gonna be fun

and i think to myself of how much my breaks its true

coz loneliness is my shadow overbearing its you

your the one who supposed to stand by me

yet where are baby? where are you baby?

im betting im better without you baby

your influence on my life was more than hazy

now i know where we stand and thats apart

with our without you wont break my heart

with or without you x2

dont need you

with or without

tryna figure you out

not gonna bother

coz with or without you, its over

im betting im better without you baby

your influence on my life was more than hazy

now i know where we stand and thats apart

with our without you wont break my heart x2