The
Morning After – Mel Afoa
(Inspired
by Chris Brown's 'Take You Down')The morning after,
He wakes me up with sensual kisses on the back of my neck.
I wake up to find him leaving a trail of kisses and licks down my naked spine,
His tongue creating a path of loving destruction,
Of intimate seduction,
His lips igniting a fire from deep within,
The evidence slowly oozing between the valley of my legs,
The stubble on his face felt as he rubs his face against my back,
As he works lower.
I subtly moan as I feel his teeth against the curves on my hips,
Biting softly, but with harsh intention,
And though still in a sleepy state in mind, I can feel myself awakening.
He can feel, see and smell it as he bites lower.
My back is to him, but the feeling is as intimate as the front,
When he grabs both ass cheeks, and bites them hard,
The pillow a wonderful helper in muffling the moan I let out.
“I'm going to enjoy this breakfast”, he says huskily,
And I feel the heat between my legs go hotter.
I move to turn around, but he quickly stops me,
Moving to straddle me by hovering on top,
My hands firmly held on the sides of my head.
Head down, ass up.
“I can't see you”, I murmur, the pillow muffling my words.
He leans forward, and kisses my right earlobe gently.
“Let me do all the seeing”, he says softly.
Before I can reply, soft pain ripples through my body quickly,
As his teeth bite my earlobe.
The pain is one filled with lust however,
So I find myself moaning from such an action.
Moving on with his exploring,
He begins to kiss and lick my back once more,
But even slower than before.
So slow that I let out a furious and impatient sigh.
I feel him grin against my skin as goes lower,
And I wait with anticipation as he finally reaches my ass cheeks once more.
He skips over my firm buttocks, instead continuing on to kiss my thighs,
Biting their thickness, and leaving his love bites on my skin.
His tongue explores down my legs for a long while,
And after he leaves extra bite marks on my thighs,
He slowly turns me around.
The first thing I see after shaking out of my lust haze,
Is his.
The lust in his eyes makes me freeze under him,
And as he gazes at me with obvious intention,
I can feel his hard excitement right under my belly button.
He bites his lips, which sends my mind into a frenzy,
Watching as his teeth bite his plump lower lip,
Slowly, before licking his top lip.
His stares into my eyes for a while,
As he hovers on top of me, straddling my hips with his.
His eyes start looking lower,
Starting point being the curves of my collarbone,
And as his eyes wander lower, his fingers touch where his smouldering eyes do.
His fingers trace down my arms and I smile as he kisses my knuckles,
And laugh as he sucks the small fat on my arms.
The heat between my legs starts boiling,
When he gets to my breasts.
Whiles his eyes and fingers roam the valley of my breasts,
He sighs, and I gulp slowly.
His fingers trace around them, cupping them while he leans in,
His sinful tongue at the ready.
I close my eyes and wait to feel his lips around on my assets,
Knowing my mind will shut off immediately,
But after waiting for a few seconds, feeling like its been years,
I open my eyes to a lust and playful expression.
“Beg”, he whispers, and I whimper.
He holds my gaze powerfully, which makes it impossible to look away,
And though caught in a lust haze, a whimpering phase,
The stubbornness comes pouring through,
And instead of heeding his command,
I spread my legs from under his straddling, and wrap them around his waist,
His hardness now poking closer to my entrance,
Hard body pressed against mine as I lift my lower body up towards his.
He shakes his head and laughs, determination now crossing his features,
Gaze getting stronger, hardness getting harder.
“I said beg”, he says harshly, before cupping my breasts even harder,
Raising them higher as he leans down and evens himself next to them.
We both know I'm about to lose,
Since he smirks as he looks at my hardened nipples,
Teasingly leaving me breathless and impatient,
His tongue inches away from tasting them.
I give in immediately after he starts to move back,
Whispering a, “please!” while I grab his head from moving.
He smirks, before he takes in the first nipple,
The smirk growing as he watches me moan and lean my head back.
I'm on cloud nine,
That much is clear.
His tongue is licking slowly, teeth biting quickly,
His lips trying to suck as much of my breasts into his mouth while he sucks.
His fingers pinch with playfulness, before the aggression comes,
And all I can do is lean my head back,
Eyes closed, mouth open, breasts pushed out, ass back, legs wrapped around his waist.
He takes a while sucking and licking my breasts,
Which quickly sends my heat into a frenzy,
And when feels me about to come just from him sucking softly on my breasts,
He puts his lips back on mine to cover the loud moan we both know will come.
“Well down, baby”, he says against my lips with a smile,
Before biting them and then proceeding to kiss my stomach.
It doesn't take me long to recover, before I feel the heat igniting once more,
As he kisses and leaves bites over my stomach.
I ignore the small uneasiness in the back of my mind about the extra fat on my stomach,
And the negative thoughts immediately disappear when he sucks to bite and suck it,
His playful manner making the feelings within grow even more.
As soon as he slithers off my body and off the bed,
Crouching down right against the end of the bed,
Yanking my body down towards him,
Spreading my legs open in front of him,
I nearly come right then and there.
He leans forward and kisses my small belly fat,
And I have to grab anywhere of the bed sheet around me,
Closing my eyes as I feel his presence sliding lower,
Positioning himself right at the mouth of my entrance.
“Don't hold anything down”, he says softly as he kisses right in the middle,
And I don't.
I don't hold in my moans as he slowly covers his lips onto my other set of plump lips,
Gulping down the sweet juice he whipped up.
I don't hold in my groans as I feel the tip of his tongue push in
Playing 'touch my body' with my clit, his tongue moving around in circles,
Licking up more juice, plunging deep and deeper.
I definitely don't hold out on panting, trying to catch my breath as I try and fail to sit up,
Watching as his head does wanders between my legs,
Well, more like his mouth and that wicked tongue.
He sucks, and I gasp, getting closer to the edge,
And he starts eating furiously when he hears my loud whimpers.
Knuckles white from holding the sheets too tight,
I instead move my hands to his head,
Sitting up and pushing his head deeper between my legs as he eats,
Sucks, licks, munches, nibbles,
I curse him in my head as the heat boils once more,
When his fingers start helping his mouth tip me off the edge.
The profanities are released, weaving themselves in between my sex noises,
As he uses multiple fingers to rub my clit while his mouth works harder,
Tongue working faster.
I come again, and he quickly swallows,
Holding my stare with his as he eats me up,
His piercing gaze never wavering elsewhere.
I can't continue the stare fest, because cloud nine greets me once more,
Head falling back onto the bed, eyes closing,
Rewarding him in my mind with a medal for the best pussy-eating.
When I feel his lips and fingers leave my now sensitive lower lips,
I open my eyes and watch as he slides over me.
“Tasty”, he says slowly, eyes still intent on mine,
And he hovers on top of my wet and sweating body,
Licks one of his fingers, before tracing the rest onto my lips.
I taste myself on his fingers, along with the spit he leaves as he sucks.
After
a while of his fingers dominating my mouth,
I
quickly manoeuvre myself so I'm on top of him.He smiles, shaking his head slightly as he sees my grin,
The smile faltering and his expression falling into anticipation,
As I slowly straddle his hips, my back towards him,
Ass cheeks resting nicely against his fine and muscular chest,
My heat warming his chest.
As I bend my head lower, towards his hardened member,
I smile.
When I take him into my mouth, I hear his moans.
When I take him deeper, I hear his groans.
When I bring my teeth out, and my deadly tongue, I can hear the pants.
I smile when I start sucking hard,
Grin when I feel him grabbing my ass cheeks, his fingernails pressing into my skin,
Raising his lower body so I can take him deeper, so his hardness can take my mouth,
Sigh with content when I start to feel him throbbing against my throat
While holding his member hostage deep within.
The morning after.
12 comments:
FUCC ME DEAD FUCCCC I JUST DIED READING THIS SHIT MY GOD I LOVE IT SO FUCCING SEXY
Wow that is a good writing piece mel keep it up lol
I wanna wife u so bad rite now
You've got a hectic imagination there lol I would like to know what happens in his point of view too good work
Aww, thank you guys! Lets just say I have a very...interesting imagination lol and as for wifing me up Anon #2? We'll see ;) Haha, cheers guys.
sorry about it miss you got a sexy imagination loll
fuccccccccck girl, ill turn lesbian just for you ahaha
Great job. I think that I just became a man all over again. Wow...
I'm in love with you
Man not only are u sexy, ur also a sexy writer fuck me dead
I just cummed reading this
Mel, don't worry about the haters. You do you gurl. Your such an amazing writer. It's crazy how good your imagination can be when you write because I am amazed at what you write every time. man am I proud to be Samoan and a female because of you. Your not afraid to step out of the comfort zone and put sexual creativity into a poem. Your not embarrassed to write erotic blogs as a young Samoan writer and that is what makes you a confident and powerful female. We as Samoan females should be proud of what you write since you can inspire us to follow our dreams regardless of cultural aspects. It's like taboo for Samoans to do anything about erotica so you are amazing If we can read 50 shades of grey, we can read your blog because it is way better. On behalf of Samoan females who secretly love erotica I salute you and congratulate you on your future success coz you will go far for sure
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